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12-07-2005, 04:43 PM
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Yup, I did like the chapter, but if I must be honest, it was a bit weaker than your past two. Not that it was bad-far from it-it just seems to be lacking something, but I'm not sure what. Perhaps it was description (even though there was some of that there). I don't know, but it was a good chapter. Keep on writing!
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