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Urg *holds head* Dipstikk, that was painful, very, very painful  but a good idea for quashing annoying n00bs.  Carry on.
Ug, just had a thought, was I an annoying n00b??? 
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In my opinion, no, you were quite good for a n00b. You put thought and effort into your story, and the chapters were well sized. Kudos to you!