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12-01-2005, 01:50 PM
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Thank you! Hmm it's strange when I type out these chapters they seem so long. Yet the one I did was only a mere four paragraphs. Not even worth to turn in as a school essay! Meh it matters not right? RIGHT!? :P

ch.14 Roit I wanna number 1 with no cheese.

While Jobe was knocked out he was dreaming. His dream consisted of something strange. Before him was an exploding factory. Each boom that occured seemed to replace blood instead of ordinary explosions with sparks and fire and such. He heard screams of glukkons,sligs,muds,and some other strange creatures he could not make out.

The creatures he heard in his dreams had a very low voice. Much like a raspy throat from an old man but much more energetic. Of course since he can't really see them it does not matter anyway. There were two figures beside of him. One on each side. One that looked like the creature that has just rescued him, and one that looks lik the size of an ordinary mud.

In a blink of an eye before Jobe the factory exploded. The explosion was not a small one and a huge tsunami of blood came torwards him. Jobe did not know what happened. What he did know though was that he was now in a bloodsoked ocean and he drowned quickly.

Jobe woke up opening his eyes quickly. He brought himself up and found out he was laying on a furry bed. He was in a room that looked ancient and worn out in time. He saw to the right of him a table full of diagrams for some strange weapons. Behind him were jars full of screeching critters.

Another thing Jobe noticed was that it seemed like he was not in oddworld anymore. Beside the bed he was laying on was a window. In the window he saw a long neverending river to a mountain. Besides that river were gravestones of some sort of creatures. "Young muds who died at an young age?" He thought to himself as he tried making out the heads on the gravestones.

Soon Jobe just remembered what really happened. He was about to have his life taken by the evil Hail, but he was saved from some creature. The first thing that popped up in Jobe's mind was "I gotta get out of here and get back to wherever oddworld could be fast!" Jobe jumped out of his bud and started looking for his gun to see if his unkown rescuer retrieved it to, but as soon as he started looking he heard a deep calm voice.

"You looking for your gun buddy?" Jobe turned around and looked at some sort of strange furry creature. He had the lower body of some sort of possibly 4 short legged elum and the upper body of some hairy.....Thing. "Sorry there I could not get it for ya. It would have just slowed me down anyway."

After Jobe looked at the creature for a good long while he asked nervously "Listen. I'm sorry for not introducing myself but I gotta go back." The creature laughed hartily. "What? And get yourself near the urge of death again?" Jobe looked annoyingly at the creaure. Since for some reason he knew he could get back on foot. This must still be oddworld. Yet some strange things still concern him."

Jobe then asked nervously "Can I ask you some questions then?" The thing said calmly to him "Shoot". Then Jobe laughed a little nervously and then asked quickly "Okay: What are you? What part of Oddworld am I in? What is your name? Also what are those drawings on the wall?"

The creature looked at Jobe for a moment and then said: "Well....I don't wanna talk about those paintings, but I can still answer all those other questions. First of all I guess you can call this "Western Mudos" since many people here like me are a little bit in the cowboy side." "Okay and what are you and what is your name then?" "My name is Roit......and i'm a steef."

END OF TEH CHAPTEROO!

We have a new character! did you think it was stranger? Well no....No stranger in this story. Actually stranger,Abe,and Munch are dead at this time of the storyline.
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