Yep and it wasn't even dripik who thought up the plan. Sorry for the shortness I was in a rush but I wanted to reply as soon as possible. Anyway....
ch.13: Holy crap it's Hail!
Dripik looked at the once bloodcraved battlefield. No guns were being fired. No shouts were being heard. Ever single living soul stood in one place looking like motionless heartless dummies. Dripik started to close his eyes...er eye for a long time and opening it again. Hoping that what just happened never really happened.
One of those motionless sligs was Jobe. Although he never got caught by the helmets oh no. In fact he was frozen in complete fear. A whole army of his that trusted him,relied on him,has now went and turned on him cause they thought his own army without Jobe's assistance would be fine. Now they are probably against him for good. Probably permanantly.
As he looked at the 2...Well one concious glukkon (Now dripik just got knocked out by a big bro slig...) Hail he realized that huge evil smirk on his face. Hail opened his mouth and said at the microphone..."Well Jobe how does it feel? *cough cough* that now you will be killed by an army you worked so HARD for only to get them against you by your's truly!? Now my slaves....Your first order will be quite simple.....KILL EM!"
All the sligs and muds looked at Jobe with their glowing eyes. Each of them raised out a weapon....They loaded they're guns or spoocebows...They raised it right at Jobe...And just like that I can say this story is over. That Jobe lost and Hail took over all of oddworld with his seemingly unstoppable army. Yet that is not the case for as the guns were shot...So was a natural reflex from a cunning and strange creature.
All the lazers and such came running at Jobe. He closed his eyes and waited for the pain. Yet before one shot could hit him....He was grabbed by something. He felt wind cutting through his body,and his body was supported by very hairy arms. He looked at what grabbed him and all he saw was an apelike head except with shiny green eyes. Then just like that...Jobe fainted from the sudden surprise that has overtook him...
End of chapter...
I think this was very good and should have at least hmm....Wait nevermind no medals. But it still seems like a great chapter!
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