Hey, to me a story is not considered a complete failure unless it gets no replies.
You're getting at least one, so that's better than what it could've been.
That chapter was a little on the short side, but I liked it. This one line cracks me up, too!
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He knows the cunning ways of general Dripik and can not risk losing his teammates. ...
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I find it hilarious that Dripik is considered "cunning" when he can't even remember his own name!
Nice work.
