Reply! Reply! Reply equals chapter! Hopefully you did not see my end of oddworld fic. (Yet another failure
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ch.12: The real plan begins.....
As Jobe runs torwards the crowd he fears he will not get to the barracks in time. He knows the cunning ways of general Dripik and can not risk losing his teammates. As he rushed through the door the army of sligs and muds started pushing the door down. Inside the barracks are millions of sligs waiting for the attack to start. Then all of a sudden the doors break down.
"Kill em!" Shouted Dripik as the army marched in. Many lazers started firing and JObe heard them from far away. He realized it was too late. "Well Hail when should we start?" Dripik asked annoyingly feeling that this is becoming a waste of time. "A little longer Dripik." Said Hail surprisingly calmly.
"Let's just wait until Jobe comes so he can see his demise..." Said Hail confidently. As Jobe gets closer to the barracks he does not notice he is going closer to an evil glukkon's succes. He passes the stockyards.....Reaches the entrance and sees the all out war raging. He looks up and sees the 2 glukkons smiling at him from a safe distance. "NOW!" Said Hail loudly.
"Sayanora! Jobe and traitors!" Said Dripik loudly as his slig helper pressed the button to have the helmets falling in the battlefield. Little did Dripik know he made a very big mistake. After a little while of laughing Dripik froze and looked at the smiling Hail who was getting slaves for his doing every second. "You....I put..." Dripik stammered in fear but Hail interrupted.
"You Dripik habe done the biggest mistake ever... For now all those sligs of Jobe's and you'rs sgall be put to my command! And there is nothing you can do about it."
End of chapter
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