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11-21-2005, 01:27 PM
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: Aug 2005
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Sorry I haven't updated the story. Thank u for the comments. Here is the next chapter:

Chapter 3: Behind Enemy Lines

Scrap was waiting for the arrows to hit him. And they did. Scrap felt the sting and saw the arrows shoot through his arms and his body. It hurt Scrap, and more arrows, and they were still coming. Scrap looked over to bud while he was crying in pain. Bud was still. He saw two Mudokons dragging him, and he tried to crawl, but knew it was hopeless. He lay still on the grass. He felt as the two Mudokons dragged him in, behind the gate. He was in enemy turf now. He closed his eyes and felt the the blood dripping over all of his body. He went still, and didn't know if he was dead or not.
He opened his eyes and looked around quickly. He was cleaned up and had stitches on his wounds. He saw Bud and he was still. He felt his chest and Bud was still breathing. He hit him in the face, and he didn't wake up. He stood up and saw that he was in a hut, with a small door. He saw a small chest, and tried to open it. It was hard, but he got it open. It had his clothes and his staff. It also had Bud's gun. He took the gun and the staff. He whaked Bud with the dull part of the staff. Bud woke up, but he was very tired. Scrap told Bud the whole story. Bud had a plan to tell to scrap.
"We gotta get outta here..." said drowsy Bud. Scrap looked at him and said, "Take your gun. There is a door over there. Let's head through it.". Bud walked to the door, and tapped it. He heard a voice outside. "Here he comes! Knock him out when he opens the door!". Bud stepped away from the door. He thought for a second, then looked up. "We can get through the roof. It is thin, and it leads outside!" whispered Bud. Scrap looked at him, then said, "Okay! I'll get on your back, and punch the roof!". Bud looked and said, "Okay, get on my shoulders.".
The plan worked. Bud and Scrap got on the roof. "Look." Bud whispered. Scrap looked, and, there were alot of mudokons. At least 800. Scrap looked around and saw the village. It was huge! It must have gone on for atleast 3 miles. Scrap saw a small vent on the ground. "I have an idea." Scrap smirked. "Let's go throuh that ventalation shaft.". Bud looked, and saw the vent." We will go for it, but there are Mudokons every were." said Bud. "We can wait untill they leave, so we can get in.".
Later, they crept down the hut and went for the hut."Get them!" screamed a Mudokon. "Run!" Bud yelled to Scrap, who responded with a nod. Scrap ran to the vent. He crawled in the hole. "Damn." Bud said, as he shot of the mudokons coming for him. Scrap ran in deeper into the shaft. Scrap knew Bud would protect him to the death. Scrap hoped Bud would come, but he was loosing hope. One on eight-hundred is nearly impossible. Scrap started to cry, but heard Bud telling him to keep going. Scrap was worried about Bud, but closed the hole. He heard Bud say, "I'll meet you where the shaft ends! Hurry!". Scrap was scared, but moved foward, in the unwelcoming darkness.


what do you think? I'll post the next one soon!
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