Thanx for the tips DS. The chapter I'm gonna pot next is short, therefore, it will be better than the first chapter. Here it is:
Chapter 2: On the Road
Scrap's mouth was wide open. He was in terrible shock. He stood there, in the room, for what seemed like hours. He finally got ahold of himself. "Come here boy!" scowled Skum. " Whaaa-whyy-wwhh.......why didn't they tell me!?!" yelled Scrap. "They wanted to keep you safe!" said Skum. "They didn't stay here, so there enemies wouldn't get or find you!" yelled Skum. "Well, now there dead.....DEAD!!!" cried Scrap, who had tears running from his eyes. He know realized the sad truth. His parents were indeed, gone.
Bud looked at Scrap and frowend."I'f it makes you feel better, you can stay with me." he said quietly. Scrap paused and said, "I guss so, if it's alright.". Skum looked at scrap, then Bud, and said," Bud will be going on a trip, to recover somthing that was stolen from the village. If you choose to live with him, you will go to.". Scrap hesitated for a moment, then said " Okay, but how long will the trip be?"."Oh, about 4 weeks. We will be going to the town of Wilfrutziz. It is inhabited buy Mudokins. Nasty creatures to us they are." said Bud." I'll go.". " Good. Heh he he heh....." Skum laughed.
"Very good indeed."
Bud and Scrap left for the village 4 days later. They were both armed with weapons. They were in for one heck of an adventure.
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