Thank you. I read some of your fic and it is cool. I will probably improve on my writing as the story goes. I will post the next part, but if no one replies, I'm gonna stop. Here it is-
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Chapter 1: Not at Home (Pt. 2)
Scrap sighed and walked on. He was walking for hours now, and he was starved! He saw a tree and looked up at it. There were crutberries in it. Crutberries are small berries that look good, but taste horrible. He was too hungry to care. He climbed up and picked them. He heard a snarl. He stayed frozen inside the tree. He heard outlaws talking to each other."Damn steef! I saw him run dis way, toward the village!" said one outlaw. Scrap knew they were talking about him. A guard must have seen him!"Ya stupid idoit! He ain't here!" "Let's look over there!". The outlaws ran out of sight.
Scrap had a chance to escape. He slipped out of the tree and ran. He ate the remaining berries. He came to a tall hill. He carfully went up, and saw the village! He was about 1 1/2 miles from the village. All he had to do was follow the forest path. He ran down and stopped. He knew what was going on. He picked up a rock, and threw it about 7 feet away. 4 out laws scurried out of either side of the forest."There's the little rat! Get 'em!". Just as the outlaws came running to Scrap, the fell to the ground. The had tripped over a wire. A tall steef jumped out of the forest, and wrapped up the outlaws with some sort of bug. When the outlaws were knocked out, the steef finally said "You got a name, kid?"."I-i-i-iiii'ts S-s-scrap."said scrap slowly. "Y'all better come with me." said the stranger. "What's your name?" "You can call me Bud." "Okay,Bud"
Scrap and Bud strayed from the path."Where are you taking me?" "Ima takin' you to Varlay Village." "Where's that?" "A few minutes, it's just up ahead.". They stopped at a big gate. Scrap was thinking to himself. What if Bud wanted to kill him. What if his name wasen't even Bud! "Stop, now!"said Scrap."Why are you taking me to Varlay? Why did you save me?. "All in good time Scrap, all in good time.". Bud opened the gate and smiled at Scrap."Here we are.". Scrap looked at the beautiful village and smiled."C'mon Scrap! Times a waistin!" They came to a large tower. Bud opened it and Scrap saw an old figure."Hello." said the figure."Are you from Vloodoo Village?"it said. "Yes, I am." Scrap answered."I have a few qustions.
"How do you know I'm from Vloodoo?" said Scrap." I know alot of things, like your parents."said the figure, as he walked out of the shodow, becoming an old steef."What do you know about my parents!" "They used to be the king and queen of this reigon of oddworld, before you were born."said the old steef. "My name is Skum, elder of this village!". Scrap had his mouth open wide. King and Queen!?!
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