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11-05-2005, 01:40 PM
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ch.1:My birth

I remember seeing light from the first second of my birth. I was being quickly taken from my mother's arms and was taken out of the room. The person who took me threw me down a table and got a needle in one hand. "What is this one's number?" he asked to his assistant. "Number 1286 sir." His scrawny assistant replied.

Before I knew it I felt pain for the very first time. Having my little belly being carved with the number 1286 on me. I noticed as I was crying in pain my mom was screaming. She was induring horrific pain and before I knew it everything became silent and she died. The man stopped carving the number since he as finished and stuffed me inside a bag.

"Sir what if he does not live through that?" "Why woulden't he?" "Lack of air sir." "It does not matter he's just another soul for the master to feast in." So just like that I was taken away from the building and was officially known as #1286.

A half hour later after wimpering and crying I saw myself thrown out of the bag. Before me was a woman. She was old and dry and looked as though she could not smile. Her eyes were red and her pupils were a strange shade of yellow. "So this is our new precious one?" The woman said.

"Damn it woman! You are to show no respect to him or any other living being!" "Fine then." The woman had a pail low voice and it seemed as though she would die any second. "What is his number?" " #1286 ma'am." "Indeed then give him to me."

So I was put in the woman's arms and she carried me inside the orphanage. My new home. "Don't worry child." She said quietly when she closed the door. "My children do not have numbers as name. All of them are special, and you look farely special. For now when you are in here. Your name will be: Jakob.

End of chapter

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