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11-05-2005, 08:11 AM
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*gasp* A post! So it has been made. So it shall be done!

ch.11: The plan begins

Jobe and his group were in a deep forest called Mushushu. They had went there since it was a reasonable supply for food and they were running out if food. His clan now consisted of about 5,000 sligs and even 15,000 muds. So the clan seperated into groups and went on they're journey by themselves in the forest. Jobe's group was small and not crowded since he can catch the attention of many sligs and get through battles well nowadays so he does not need to many sligs and muds in his group.

The other group however is big and huge so Dripik, Hail, and Deribas thought that is where Jobe would be. So one night a leviating monitor like object came to the base to where the huge group is which by the way had Deribas watching from the monitors point of view.

As it came to the slig gaurd he shouted "Stop right there and identify yourself!" Then Deribas from the monitor shouted "Ya nada videt Jobe!" "....What?" "Oi cack english skazat? I need to see jobe!" "Oh... Well he ain't here right now!" "YA magu vsat mosage?" "....Uh...sure but in english please."

"Harasho! Hmm...In the slig barracks we are not giving sligs food and water anymore. If you want them to survive go there in 3 days or be responsible for 10,000 slig deaths." "10,000!!! You're sick!" "Eta phso packa" The monitor turned off and the slig saw it drop to the ground and started thinking [ We don't need Jobe's help. We got numbers on our side! ]

So he rushed into the camp where all the other sligs and muds were. The camp was big and like a town more than a rest stop. Elum's grunting, slig's giving out new and improved guns they made which were fake sometimes and Mud's builded an altar for worshipping bigface. So then the gaurd went into the bonfire (Which was in the middle of the campsite. It was like the main hall of a mansion.) and started getting everyones attention.

He told everybody about his little meeting with Deribas and how they could storm slig barracks without the help of Jobe. This made everyone cocky thinking that numbers were on they're side and started yelling out that they should storm the barracks the next day. So they all got ready for the next day and went to sleep.

Jobe woke up hearing marching near the camp and got out of his portable tent. His campsite with his group was on a hill. A good place to see what was going on from miles away. Jobe looked over the hill and saw an almost endless line of sligs and muds storming a factory. Which seemed to be the slig barracks.

"Those idiots! I told them not to go to war by themselves without my permission!" Jobe went to tell the rest of his group but it seems as though they joined storming the barracks also. "Dammit they will all get killed! They don't know what the barracks might have in store for them!" So he took his gun and ran out torwards the crowd.

From the barracks dripik and Hail were watching the army coming closer to the barracks. "N-Now remeber you know that I will not drop the devices until practucally the whole army get's inside." "For the love of god mon I KNOW! I KNEW 10 FRIGGIN TIMES ON HOW WE ARE GONNA DO THIS!" "Yelling again" "Just....Just shut up"

So as the main door of the barracks is beong hammered and almost falls. The plan will then begin in less than 10 minutes and counting...

End of chapter

This was definetly not my best work but hey we get the plot advancement, and we get more temptation.
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