Not again! I always miss the clifhangewrs.
But, I get to give my thoughts on 3 chapters. They were short but good. And I don't just think I'm smart, I know I am, seeing as I was rugight about Druna. *Grins* Just joking Dave.
I like the idea of a supermarket in the factory, and the timer thing should make for some fast pced, exciting and tension-filled chapters. Keep it up mate!