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Hello everybody! This is my second fanfic and I intend to make it better than my Jobe the slig one (Although I will still update that one from time to time also.)! Here is a story with an abe's oddysee like storyline but in the real world...Kinda like the real world. Anyway I shall begin now and stop my bickering.

ch 1:My situation...

Hello my fellow reader. My name is Jakob. I am writing this novel via voice activation because my body is strapped down to a table. I live in the city called flame city. Or as the outsiders like to call it:The city of the devil.

There is no such thing as compassion here. We all worship the leader of hell known as Satan. All Jews,christians,and athiests are taken to the torture chamber. The place where I am now waiting for my death. Yet I am not here for any of those reasons.

I trespassed and destroyed something. Something that could have killed us all. Something that could make this already sad excuse of a planet into a wasteland, and instead of a party being thrown for me I must face this horrible consequence. You are probably now wondering why I said this planet is horrible. Well I will tell you all that later during my real story.

For now I can only give you hints about it. I never knew how to feel love. I know how to kill but not kiss. I know how to torture but not feel freindship. My fifteen year old life has been stuck within this city.

I became an orphan because of my parents dying in this exact same torture room. On this exact same table. So I had to live in an orphanage. Which was sadly next to this horrific building I am in right now. From the beggining of life in there I had to fall asleep in the screams and crying of the victims that perished here.

Sadly that is all I can tell you for now. Now I must go an rest and save my breath for the next long painful chapter you will read. Soon I will tell you everything that happened. From the beggining...To the end of where I am in right now...

End of chapter..

So what do you think? I understand if you aren't into that depressing dark stuff you might not like it so much but hey I think this intro was really good myself! So? Any comments?