At last, i was starting to worry that you'd given up on this. Murphy really is a great vykker! Not only has he got all you sadi, but he's got a rubbish sense of humor tyo compliment it all!
The chapter's formatting ascrewedup a bit in the middle and you've got a feew lines of talics that you might want to fix. But yeah, the chapter is good!
And if i had the time I'd tell you to write more soon and don't go and daisappear for so long again cause I was getting worried that this fic would be discontinued, but I don't. So, yeah.
|