Wheee, I come on to find two new chapters!!! The first was good and gruesome, I liked this line in particular
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MY TERRITORY, which is more or less wherever I happened to be as a scrab.
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It made me chuckle.
Chapter 71 was very good, hmm, Druna cheating on Patch? Lemme guess, she fancies Dante!
*Sings* Druna and Dante sitting in a tree....While Patch tries to climb up it and get at Dante. *stops singing*
More nasty deaths, which is good, and I had a great mental image when reading of the overweight slgis, just try and piture a Slig with his stomach spilling over his pants top, getting pummelled by an old mudokon. Hillarious. And the Shrykull thing is interesting, is Dante addicted to it? And I wonder if the twist involves it, perhaps he has to rescue them ASAP so that he does't lose control with the shyrkull and zap everyone, or just plain out dies from the power. Great couple of chappies, waiting for more! Pity though that there's only 15 chapters left, this story is too good to end. Do a sequel! Or we could start on that joint fic.
Oh, and good news for any of those who are still hoping I will update my fic, chapter 10 is one it's way, possibly today, if not then tomorrrow.
PS: Freaking Fuzzle Force, I look forward to reading your fic.