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Yay, finally another chapter, only 16 to go... ooohhhh, it's going to be so long, bring some more fast! ... Noticed somthing though, there are something like 8 food oriented zulags, and all the chapters looked quite the same lately, I mean, it's slig killing-mud freeing-slig killing-mud freeing... otherwise it's wonderful, almost better than Disneyland!
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Yeah ... I did notice this myself. But you see, I'm only writing what comes to me. There was never any elaborate planning for anything that has happened in this story. You might say that if Oddworld was a real place, I would be retelling the tale of Dante the mudokon, not making it up and controlling his life.
There is a bit of a twist coming up in chapter 73. It surprised me a little when I was planning chapters. It likely won't change the action much, but it might give things a sense of urgency. If you can believe it, I don't like to interfere with things in Dante's world too much, and the phrase
deus in machina doesn't apply to me.
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And what happened to your doomed suspenful cliffhangers? Either way, can't wait to get to the prologue again.
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There are sure to be more cliffhangery endings coming up.
I'm going to explain something to all y'all, and reveal a bit. I am not planning the
events, but I
am planning how the story is told. What I wanted to do was create a sense that Dante is doing great, and that he'll pull this off without a hitch ... leading up to the obvious change in luck, as evidenced by the prologue.
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Arrrh, I hate having only three posts, I'm actualy the only user I saw with no star... am I not even worth half a star?
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Well, be active and up your postcount. Don't spam. Easy. I think you get a star at, like, 50 posts. Hell, I'd probably have less than 100 if I never wrote this story.
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Oh and by the way, I'll be starting my own fanfic soon, that's actually why I made myself an account... Keep an eye open for Crump's Oddysey!
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Duly noted. I'll look for it.