OOC: Bbs600, you can put that in writing like this: 'Max turned into Arnie's direction and greeted him. "How are you... etc." It's easier this way. Just advice.
And, it's dripik. You usually write an 'x' instead of 'k'.
Apart from these, your RPGing seems pretty good. Keep it up!
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Rick went to the counter.
Rick: "Hey, RG. Everything fine with the security?"
RG-49: "As you can see, I reactivated the chant suppressors. It is possible that it wasn't you who tried to possess the Boss of Rupture Farms, but from now on, it will be impossible."
Rick: "Yeah, whatever."
He looked at the tray with the Scrab Legs, which reminded him on something.
Rick: "RG, you don't happen to know anything about some sort of food-holding appliance, do you?"
RG-49 looked at Rick.
RG-49: "Food-holding appliance? I have never heard of such a thing. What use would that have?"
Rick: "Well, you know, we always have to hold these Scrab Legs and everything for the Glukkons so they can eat them. I think there should be some sort of simple machine in the Cafeteria which can hold the food instead of the employees."
RG-49: "And, I belive, your job is to do whatever your superiors tell you. Tell me if I'm wrong."
Rick: "You are right, but I have other duties as well. Cleaning the factory, operating levels, hauling crates and so on. And I can't complete those tasks while I'm holding Scrab Legs. That is
not effective."
RG-49: "Not effective, you say..."
Rick: "Exactly. And I though we should make that machine."
RG-49: "We? I have experience with machinery, but what can you do to help me?"
Rick: "So you want to help then?"
RG-49: "Hm... OK, maybe in the little free time I'll have.