thanx Odd Chick for checking my chapter and my grammar as well
and sorry I've not updated this thread... I've been ill the whole week, having a cold
anyway I'll send a or some new chapters next week if I have time... ya see I and my classmates are going to set up a musical at school. I don't know when, but probably soon and I have to be there working.
anyhow... next week I'll send in more... I hope
See Ya!
-DS