Well I like it, yer characters are most definitly Odd and you've pulled it off very well, and I love this setting you've come up with, very in tune with the Oddworld games, just the right amount of, how should I put this? Fear factor I guess. Like with Rupture Farms it was getting turned in meat treats and in Soulstorm Brewery it was the bone brew, and you've got this parady of a circus for freaks, it fits quite nicely in my opinion.
Hrm, I'm rambling...sorry...
Anyway, good start and waiting for more.
