its taken me the best part of a week to read all this but it was worth it! It's great Dave, I can't believe I never saw this before! I wonder how many mudokons he'll manage to save before getting stuck in the predicament the very first chapter saw him in! I love the way you talk about the economical breakdown of the Magog Cartel, getting rid of Tastee Treets (if it happens) will probably be a bad blow for the Cartel. The way you mixed Dante's story with Abe's was also excellent.
I have one complaint and that is a lot of his original adventures in Oddysee, going through all the trials and whatever, all turned out a little to easy for him, like some of what sounded to be a terrible challenge were very easy. Still, it is all great anyway. Can't wait for more!
I really need to go write TQFTO... AND PROVE TO HAOVC THAT IT CAN BE AS GOOD AS THIS! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
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