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09-25-2005, 03:32 AM
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Yes,update! Great chapter, it was funny in palces with the sligs, it set the scenario of what was going on in the Industrial world very well, and it had action, ont too much, but enough. Also Dante has his first bit of sucess, in an ironic way with the escapees. How did they not rcognize him though? Mind you, I suppose him getting shot then going throuygh those trials with have changed his look completely. chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next update.
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