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Although, if I must be honest, some of your other chapters were better than this one, I did enjoy reading this one.  It seems that Stranger and the Leader are getting along just fine. I can't wait to see what else happens. |
*reading the chapter once more*
yeah yer right about that...
I guess I didn't read through the whole chapter a lil bit closer than the other ones, but thanx for the critique though Odd Chick! I'll think about that till next time
anyway I'm about to write the next one soon and then it'll be both well done and also more exciting then before
See Ya!
- DS