[metroixer]

Okay first of all this is my first post so this is also my first fanfiction.Any advice as I follow the story along would be appreciated..

Chapter 1:Slig go splat!

It was an ordinary day at the snoozer prudoction company.Besides the fact that some sligs had got some special passes to visit.To see what the interns do during production.Jobe an ordinary slig who watches 5 slaves was one of the lucky ones to get this pass.He was interested in how snoozers work.So he was excited about this also that he got to torture some mudokons while he was there.As he watched the interns put in the snoozer's beam he heard some slaves having a conversation while scrubing blood from their own kind off.

"So did u put in the device last night"

The mudokon on the left said.

"I sure did!In a half hour the machine will malfunction!Tracking any metal down!"

His buddy said happily.

"Well that means there are gonna be less sligs to worry about!"

Said the left one grinning.

Hearing this Jobe went to them and said in his pursyasive(sp?) voice while holding his gun up

"Okay slaves I heard your little chat.What machine Are u talking about?"

To this the left mudokon kicked Jobe so hard his pants malfunctioned,he couldn't move,and he fell uncontous(sp?).After what seemed like forever Jobe woke up.But to his horror he did not see the lamps connected to the ceiling of the factory shine on his face.Insted he saw a circle flat like metalic object over him.This is the machine the slaves were talking about.This was the metal smasher.And since it malfunctioned and got of course and saw Jobe who was part metal.Jobe was about to become a victim to the smasher.

To be cont....