I think Actra and the Noctero (would there be a plural for that or not?) are absolutely spiffing!
For one thing it's about time there was a truely Odd heroine out there (even if it is just for fan work) so a job brilliantly done Dipstikk. And don't worry about them not being perfectly accurate, when was anything in Oddworld accurate to life (I doubt a Scrab could exist without loads of problems...). So love the art and keep at it.