Great new chapters! Funny, interesting, and very very good! i loved Dante's constant ill reactios to the teleport, and the description of Vykkers' Labs from the ground:
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Floating above me like some disgusting sore...... It had to be Vykker’s Labs.
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was amusing. The Vykker conversation was accurate and funny, I think that when they insult each other like that they for some reason remind me of Sligs. Again, nothing to critiscize. Good work, I look forward to more!