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ooc: I'm gonna assume it's empty then.
Beavis Core, like groll said, your character looks good, should be interesting to see, and as I've said many times, just reading the last 4 or 5 pages should be fine for now, you can catch up on the rest as time goes by. If you think about it your character wouldn't really know everything that was going on that well either if he's only just arrived.
AVD, no offence, but you really need to improve your grammar, some of it is almost impossible to understand.

Stivik arrived at the Security Office and knocked on the door. Everything was quiet inside. He stepped in and found it empty, so he went over to the computer and brought up the security camera records.
He was annoyed to find it was an old model, looking for Anni was something he would have to do by sight. He sighed and began searching.

An hour and a half (and three false alarms from that idiot Kix, who wouldn't stay still) later he spotted the image of a female mudokon walking down a corridor with Math. He leaned forward. It could only be Anni, and she was walking towards the older part of Repture Farms!
Stivik leapt out of his seat. What was she doing, going down there? That place was in ruins, even he knew that. He made to run out of the doors, before remembering that he had a limited time that he'd already taken three quarters off. Plus he didn't have any weapons beyond his gun, having used his grenades. After a few seconds indecision, he made up his mind and ran towards the armory.


Jim wandered down a corridor, spotting an open door to one side. He ran towards it and peeped through. Inside there was a vykker leaning over a chair, but from the angle he was at he couldn't see who or what. However tempted he was to go inside though, spotting a huge b-b-slig standing nearby was enough to stop him! MAybe it'd go away soon and he'd be able to ask the vykker where he was.