Thanx LoboDiabloLoneWolf! Well I'd plan this story for a couple or maybee three moths bfor I began to send it in and I didn't expect it to be so long... but that's doesn't bother me though I really love to write stories and especially when it's bout Oddworld
anyhow I got to go know cuz I have to write the next part of the story so ya readers can have something to read
See Ya!
DS