Cripes!
Someones in trouble ...
This is fantastic. I've totally gotten over my need for a prelude or a backstory. It's quite insightful ... if that's even the right word ... in any case, this chapter makes it very clear what Tom and Guy's attitude towards their positions are, and that this will be quite a serious story, and there are going to be some intense trials ahead of Tom and Guy. You aren't screwing around with this story, and I dig that.
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