Great chapter! That one was pretty funny. I liked how you described the vision, and how Bung acted. And these cracked me up too:
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I tripped over some item - could’ve been a rock, a bone, a turd, who knows
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His mouth was hung open in a sort of “I’m-sleeping-and-would-be-snoring-if-I-could” sort of way
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“Guys, this is gonna be a little weird, but I need you to trust me, okay?”
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I also liked the way they reacted when he told them to strip bung. Humourous chapter, keep up the good work.