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Vry good chapter. You mixed in all the elements neccessary, humour, action, character's emotions, good dialogue, and it was a good read. The whole fic so far ahs beeen a very high standard, reminding me of some of the older fics by authors such as Teal and S'laskia (I may not have been here back then but I have read their fics), rather than non-paragraphed, block of text fics which are average. I can't wait to see that picture acted out, and I really want the next chapters. Please don't get writer's block!
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This is EXACTLY how I feel about this story as well.
All of the characters' personalities (well, the ones from the game, anyway) are on-par with the game, and that's great because that's the way a good fanfic should be.
The humor is well-balanced as well and not overdone. I love this story!
