Vry good chapter. You mixed in all the elements neccessary, humour, action, character's emotions, good dialogue, and it was a good read. The whole fic so far ahs beeen a very high standard, reminding me of some of the older fics by authors such as Teal and S'laskia (I may not have been here back then but I have read their fics), rather than non-paragraphed, block of text fics which are average. I can't wait to see that picture acted out, and I really want the next chapters. Please don't get writer's block!
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Fuzzle Guy: Apart from going swimming I've never been more wet in my life than when I went to see Take That.
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