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But it was once again, well written, good emotions, you did a good job of capturing the image of Larry hudling away in the corner watching the slog that could at any moment turn on him. Twas good. Keep going!
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Yep, this is exactly how I feel about this chapter.
I liked the image of Larry in the corner as well. That was portrayed very realistically and it was a tense moment as well. Keep up the good work!
