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08-10-2005, 09:02 AM
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Good chapter Splat! Like odd chick said, cliffhangers are good, they leave it open to the imagination, but keep it tense and make the readers want to see what's next. Just one thing, why does a no farts sign prevent Abe blowing them up? Does it sound an alarm or something?
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