[Munch's Master]

Very good chapter. You could easily be an author with talent like thi, as Dark_Elite said earlier. I'm working on my fic but I'm unhappy with my latest chapter. Anyway keep this up, I've seen too many good fics forgotten about (Nepharski's fic (I forget the name), the Rector Refinery, Job, The Quest for the Orb, The Oddworld Alliance(a very old fic), and so on) as the writers lose inspiration.
Note: I was not insulting the writers of any of those fics, I was complementing them for being good, yet saying its a shame that those fics are on hold at the moment. There's a hint you see, writers get writing!