Iye, tis good. Thou hast created some good characters and a good setting. Thou should be proud of thyself!
And while I'm not speaking Old English, its great, your characters are all intriging (isn't there a U in that word somewhere?) and there stories are good (if all a little similar).
THere was something a little wierd about that chapter. It's generally difficult putting characters direct thought into a third person story, it's just hard to do well! It's still good though.
And I'm still looking forward to seeing a plot developing. Judging by the title, it's set to be a good one. Epic.
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