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07-23-2005, 12:56 AM
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Biggy Bro Slig
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: Jun 2003
: Monsaic Lines
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The blue helicoptor zoomed off.
The Guru trailed after us.
“Biggy bro, look down below us!” Slug shouted.
I was currently piloting. I looked below.
Armies. But not on our side. Humanoids and Robolice roamed the sandy ground.
Silver tanks hovered infront and behind. They aimed their guns at the helicoptor.
“This is Commander Droy. What side are you on?” The radio came on.
I didn’t answer.
The commander got annoyed with that. They fired.
“Ziggy! Launch the Magma Bomb!” I shouted.
The Magma bomb was the worst bomb possible. When dropped, the red-hot magma stored inside melts through oddworld’s crust, then into the core. It then turns into Chaos.
Then the floor opens up. Sucking up anything. After a while, it closes again.
We dropped the bomb.
It didn’t explode.
The army scattered.
“I never liked those bombs.” Ziggy said.
We flew away.
I saw Boneworkz in the distance.
We flew off...

I'm sorry it wasn't much of a peice of writing.
I couldn't think of anythign to write exept this.
Make the next chapter longer.
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