[Kaizer]

After much talking with my friend I have decided that Shreds name shall be changed. Raziel shall be his new name. This has been a while coming but I didnt want to much of a hassle with Shred/Raziels name. But now I give you:

Chapter 4: Fire of spooce

The battle had been raging on for a long time, and neither sides seemed ready to fall. Countless sligs had fallen, and many more mudakons. Thankfully with the help of shaman to revive the fallen the mudakons stayed in the fight. However the shaman were losing energy and both sides knew the battle was begginning to change.
"How much longer can we keep this up?" Tealos asked Gelrood. "Not much longer longer I fear" Gelrood replied. "They dont want to give up do they?" Vatrok said. "Not in the leasht!" Salamander called back. Tealos fired another bolt then ducked as a slig fired a new gun that Tealos had only heard of. An 'anti-mudakon-eradication-rifle' the Vykkers had called it. The 'murderkon' the sligs dubbed it. It fired blasts of matter filled with small bacteria that ate through organic skin. It could also be charged so that the blast became bigger. That was what Raziel had told him anyway. As another blast hurtled past him he had an idea. "Cover me!" he said to Raziel as he sat and started making spooce flow into his own weapon. Raziel continued firing at sligs down below, stopping only to dodge murderkon blasts. "Almost finished" Tealos mutttered. Raziel looked at him, "What?" he asked. "I said... OH MY ODD!" Tealos yelled as a barrage of bullets tore through Raziels head. Gelrood ran over to Raziel and placed his hand on Raziels face. A blue light flowed through Gelrood and into Raziel. Tealos looked toward Vatrok and Salamander. They at least were still alright. He felt his hand become suddenly hot and looked back at his bow. It was glowing red with inner fire. He aimed it at the group of sligs and fired at the center of the army. On conact it exploded with deadly force hurtling sligs into other sligs and burning them. Sligs that survived were on fire and soon all the sligs were burning.
"I was not expecting that" Gelrood said. "We have triumphed in one way, but to win has cost us our home" Doran said as he approached the group. "The fire will burn what little is left in this village" he finished. "Tealos, I shall tell you a prophecy directly related to you" Gelrood said. "What?" Tealos asked. "Tonight, you shall hear your fate" Gelrood said as the mudakons started walking into the forest.

It is getting hard to find time to do this so dont expect another for a week at least. Signing off.