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07-14-2005, 07:20 PM
odd chick
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Nice couple of chapters, Kaizer. I thought chapter 2 was the best one so far.
I do agree with Dave, though-the way you have the character conversations set up is a bit difficult to follow. Other than that, the story's really good.
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