Constructive critism is always appreciated everyone! Holidays are coming up so I'm unsure how often I'll be able to check in. But now...
Chapter 3: Shred
"Nuther one down sarge!" number 334726 said to Shred. "Damn" Shred said pretending to care. This battle was pointless and the only reason he continued to fight it was becuase of his mission. " I'm going to infiltrate them" he said. "Sarge?" 334726 asked. Shred looked at him, his red eyes giving the pooper a 'dont ask, just listen' look. "Sir, your not even a big bro yet! How are you gonna get into the fortress?" another slig asked. "Oh, I have my ways" Shred replied sinisterly. "It's your funeral- er, I mean, promotion sir!" 334726 said. Shred grabbed his blitzpacker and blasted the slig into a dynamite carriage. The resulting explosion splattered the green landscape with red. "Hehe, I'm goin' out with a bang!" Shred siad amused. He then turned and walked towards the fortress.
"Meeting between the leaders!" a messenger cried to Tealos. Gelrood and Argus, leaders of the shamans floated down to the chiefs hut, followed by the leaders of the tomahawkers, two mudakons by the name of Jaxun and Gasher and the mudarchers, Firana and Tealos. The chief, Doran, welcomed them all as they stood round the huts interior. Salamander and Vatrok also stood inside. "Now", Doran said, "we have a new, important addition to our army." Everyone looked at each other. "Greetings everyone" a voice came as a figure walked slowly into the hut. "Slig! Protect the chief!" Jaxun cried. "Stop!" Gelrood yelled over Jaxuns panick-striken voice. "This slig is the new addition" Doran said, looking at Shred. "WHAT!?" Jaxun and Firana cried in unison. "HE's a sl...slig!" Firana exclaimed. "Quiet!" Argus hissed. "This slig has been approved by Gelrood already" Doran said, "he is not going to destroy us from within." Indeed Tealos could feel no murderous intent within the slig, he really did want to help.
"Now, the battle we are fighting is going suprisingly well, so I want you to be on the lookout for another attack force from the rear or anywhere else" Doran briefed. "Everyone, I want you all to make sure that Tealos survives this fight" Gelrood said. Tealos gave him a quizical look and Firana asked; "why?" he said. "The red moon, as most of you know, was the same night as Tealos was born, there is a prophecy which states-" Gelrood stated, but was cut of when a loud bang sounded from the direction of the front wall and a mudakon crawled into the hut. "They're....to powerful...front wall... broken... camp...danger..." he gasped and then lay still. "Theres that attack force!" Firana said, readying his bow. "All of you, may take one weapon from my hut, each one is crafted of much higher grade than the norm so they are more powerful" Doran said. Tealos grabbed his favourite weapon, the 'spooceflame' a bow adorned with flame carvings and had a red gem rather than the standard blue. Jaxun and Gasher both grabbed finely made tomahawks and Salamander grabbed a staff made from a now extinct type of tree. Vatrok picked up a spear with a criss-cross pattern and blood still stained on the tip. Firana petted his bow. "This is all I'll ever need" he said. Doran retreived his own personal weapon: a bow he called 'sligslayer.' "Lets go!" Doran said. The group ran out to do battle with the invaders.
I might be able to get in a few more soon but the holidays are a real challenge, timewise. Anyways, keep the feedback up people! See ya's all later!
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