Thanx Ann Neely and to everybody else who are reading my story! I'm going to have my vaccation on thursday this week... and as a your writer may I ask you readers a favor? ya see... I use to be on this site about 15 minutes each day and write and send more on me story, but now when I'm going to have me vaccation it'll get little more complicated to do it... I'm suposed to me at me grandmother's place and she has a comp. but she's afraid I'm going to infect her comp. with some f***ing virus and all of those shit things... anyway I guess I might be able to send me story...when she doesn't know I'm on the net
but I wonder if you readers could ya know...update this site, jus' send an email to this site and it'll be good. I don't want this site to disappear as my Odd-poem thread and it'll be a shame if this disappers to isn't it?
well here is some more on me story enjoy! it's not much but I sended in it anyway...
Alca shouted with angerness:
- Knock it of! I've heard enough! There will be NO voting contest and that's the way it is! If anyone of you three tries to have this contest anyhow... then he'll meet my deepest anger which no-one has ever met before... and don't make me loose my temper. The one of you who choose to do it have to leave the tribe and never return. Do you understand?
- I understand, Carak said as he turned around, Loser... Let's go brothers.
They walked away to their hut and sat down on the carpet. Vivay suddenly said:
- How are we going to have this contest now? Alca will not leave the leadership to us and if we're having this contest anyway he'll send us away from the tribe...
- Eh, calm down a bit! We stil have a chance to have our voting contest without getting discoverd by our loser to brother, said Carak with a sarcastic voice.
- What do you mean Carak? There is no way we can do it! If you and Noka are going to do that then I'm not helping you two, said Vivay.
- Oh really? It doesn't matter if you're joining or not, 'cause if he figures out that we're having the little contest anyway then he'll send us away and that includes you to. After all you were helping us in the begining...said Carak and grined.
- It's not fair, said Vivay with a sad look in his eyes.
- What is fair? NOTHING is fair! And that's it, yelled Carak.
- Carak's right Vivay... Alca is too selfish and don't care a thing about us, if he hadn't been selfish, then he would left the leadership to us without any argue... I suggest we fight against Alca and make him weak and powerless then we take his place. The only thin we have to do is how and when we're going to do our attack, asked Noka.
- Good thinking, but then we need to have a plan... a very good plan, said Carak and smiled with an evil look in his eyes.
bye see ya soon!
DS