^^ odd chick said more or less what Id've said. I liked the bit at the beginning where we saw some more of his past at Tastee Treats, and the bit with Patch was pretty funny and good too. Good desvription and characterization as always Dave. Keep it up! Oh and thanks for clearing that up about the BigBro, I forgot that bit all that time ago. Also, 8 more chapters! Hooray! But whatever happend to those witty verses you did before a chapter?
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