Heh, as soon as I go off, new chapters galore eh? Cool, here's my verdict:
Chapter 31- Cool about the grubbs. At first I didn't expect it to be them but then as they talked I realized it was them. I also loved the Gabbit morph description.
Chpater 32- Funny chpater here, especially with the inern bit./ The morph description was cool and I loved it when Intern Dante "Had a sudden urge to listen to loud rock music and put a tight fitting garment on to cover his crotch." Funy and apt for an intern.
Chapter 33- Cool and creepy, with the bit about the boiling blood, the octigi, and the scrab attacking. Nice cliffhanger too, with the mudokon spirit. What will happen next?
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