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06-28-2005, 03:39 PM
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Oops, spoiler!
Anyway, that was a nice chapter, BBS-I enjoyed it, but could you be a bit more descriptive? Everything is just flowing a bit too fast, that's all.
Other than that, the story's great-keep up the good work!
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