They were another 2 amazing chapters. i loved the transformation ritual scene,m it had amazing description with the slog morph., and I like how you gave the mudokon crowd the appropriate reactions for the morphs. I'd totally forgotten about the Intern power, so it wsas cool to see it. I also liked the way you described those new creatures at the end of the mosrt rcent chapter, and how you explain each character's emotions- Dante the hero, Patch the irritable shaman, Pyll the confident chief, Altus the anxious to please mud, etc. etc. I must say this story has very good description with the amazing plot and action as well. Keep this up! For those 2 chapters, I say:
4.99999 etc./5 (I never give full marks, as I always want to be more pleased by the next bit)
Looking forward to the next chapter(s).
