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Very good work. I'm impressed!
I like the little touches, like the detail you put into the way the characters talk. The instant I realized it was a grubb speaking to Job, George, and Shilah, the little whiny grubb voice took over in my mind and it fit perfectly.
Congratulations on a story well told. I look forward to the next chapter.
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That's exactly what happened to me, too. (with the slightly croaky little grubb voice being placed into my mind.) Anyway, your story is awesome, Kimon. We can't wait to read the next part of it.
