Lol, it's just you posted this in the wrong forum. And that's okay, it happens. Next time, post your stories and fanart and stuff in the Non oddworld art and literature [or the oddworld fan forum if it's about oddworld].
DI is the moderator [or one of] for the off-topic forum, but don't worry about it this stuff happens from time to time.
It's a good story though, I like the way you've developed the characters.
- Rexy
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