Very good I really like this story, it has so much description that it lets you imagine it much better. Here were my favourite bits:
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At this, one of the executioners ran from the hall in tears, and across the city many a television was switched off in disgust (“No violence? Then what good is it!?”)
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That made me chuckle it did. And:
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That’s it? No torture? No water in the face? No 50 lashes with a whip? Good Odd, and you call yourselves masters of justice? Whatever is the world coming to?”
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That was another funny bit. But there is one thing I need to point out:
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“You have been found most disgustingly guilty of treason against the crown, the corporations, and the almighty dollar!”
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Oddworld doesn't use dollars, it uses moolah. So surely it would be the almighty moolah? But still a very good chapter. I look forward to the next!