Cool chapter, BBS.
The only thing I can point out is that you could've joined the sentences a bit better. (Ex- Instead of "Time froze, and both of them dissapeared.
I was the only one in the entire world who had not been frozen.", "Time froze, and both of them dissapeared, but
I was the only one in the entire world who had not been frozen."
) Other than that, the content in this story is excellent.
Keep it going!
