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06-09-2005, 03:57 AM
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Revenge for Demon-Fire: Episode I

Hello and welcome to one of my latest stories.
I just thought this story up and decieded to make this up as I go along.
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Chapter I: The Burniation
Dennis, returned to his home from a long day of hiking in the fresh air when he found his cottage in flames and ashes. "W-what happend to my house!?" Wondered Dennis. "I k-know what happend, I saw it all behind the safety of this rock. A mysterious dragon had come out of it's cave to his daily
burnination." the shaking mudokon said. "it's name is Demon-Fire." he said. "Well i shall seek out revenge fo Demon-Fire." Dennis declared. "No! You won't come back alive!" The mudokon said. "I'll find a way!" Dennis said marching to the cliff to the cave.

"Why can't I go in?" Dennis asked. "Well, you aren't in proper clothing, you aren't going to last 3 seconds without armour!" The guard said. "Well, some how I'll get some armour. Dennis finds some other cave and figures that A crazed beast lives and might find guard corpses. He was right. "Oooh, look! Armour, i'll just-" Dennis was cut-off by a raging and crazed Scrab has scars everywhere and is almost bigger than the cave! The scrab screeched and tried to kill Dennis! "Yikes!" Dennis Yelped. Dennis picked up a sword from a corpse and sliced it near the ribs! It screeched it pain and cut Dennis in the leg. "Ouch!" Dennis yelled in pain. he took the sword and lunged and the scrab with so much anger and power, that he cut the scrab in half all the way to the cave ground! it shook and Dennis ran out before he could grab the armor. "Crud, oh well, at least I got this freally cool sword." Dennis said to
himself.
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Chapter II will be continued tomorrow.
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