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06-04-2005, 12:37 PM
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Wowie zowie. Imagine my surprise at checking the Fan Corner and finding a work of fan fiction by none other than Dipstikk.

I love the dialogue. Not just what the characters say, but they way you have it written. Just with punctuation, you've created a distinct voice in my head for every character that speaks. I love the concept as well. The plot is solid, which is so much more than I can say for most other OW fan fics I've read. I like the way you go into detail without being boring-- that's a tough one to put into practice. The drawings add a lot to the story.

My bladder bursts with excitement. Post more soon.
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